Friday, August 6, 2021

Alma Description

 The Task was to describe what she look like. We had to include lots of detail. The hard part  was to get ideas.                                                                                                                                                                             The Thing I enjoyed was writing it down. I think we should make a poster for her personality. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Harry

    I hope all is good with you in your bubble at home?

    This is a really good piece of descriptive writing. I really enjoyed reading it. I like some of the words that you have used too. Especially using her hair peeks out from her beany! And she really does look super warm!
    Well done, keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.

    Until next time

    Mrs Costello :)

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